Frankenstein's Marduk
Okay, so some of the humour of this piece was more risque and interestingly funny than has previously been channelled in this series. I like the way that it went with the "I like your hair" and how this quickly escalated to ridiculous proportions.
One question though, who was the arsehole? I think that we need to see this expanded slightly, in order to perceive the full glory of the production. You don't need to see the punchline until the end, but it's a good set up for later.
Perhaps a little more work on the animation style - the crying doesn't seem to work, so maybe it would be better to have the tear drops running down his face, through all the areas of rough skin, creating their own channels as you see fit.
Finally, did the neck have to look like an engorges black penis? More work on the trapezoid muscles - the ones that come out of the side of the neck and join to the shoulder, which would reduce the impression of a penis.
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