The Ending
Overall, this is a very good flash, but there is something that bothered me (refer to title). I felt that the ending was a bit rushed and forced. Maybe expand on the scene after the "Christmas greenery"? But, like I said, great flash. You deserve an 8, dear friend.
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Did you use SFX from.. Sailor Moon? o_o
I liked it
The aesthetics of this short really blew me away. It's clearly not made in Flash but it looked great, I love the effects used for the orb. The design of the little character is cute, too.
I just wish you'd had more time to create more of a story and see what else you could have got out of this! I'd like to see what you make next :)
Need a story
Animation: 5/5
Story: 1/5
Sounds: 5/5
8/10
Nice short film
I really enjoyed it, the lack of story would have been frustrating if it was a longer video but for it's length it was fine.
The colour and contrast were brilliant!