Decent animation and a really good effort
This animation was a bit long, but the animations weren't repeated so that show lots of effort. The cons though are that most of the dialouge is very hard or impossible to understand. I suggest working on being more clear with your dialouge during recording or put subtitles on the bottom. Also, another big problem is the sounds jump constantly. It is constantly going from very quite to very loud throughout the entire movie. This caused me to constantly have my hand on the volume knob so I could turn it up and hear the quite parts then turn it down on the loud parts so it wouldn't blow my ears out. I'm not gonna knock too much on the quality of the animation because you showed alot of effort so the general quality of the art shouldn't be criticized much. Just make sure to improve on your human body art and animation, it is lacking a bit. Well I hope this review helped and make sure you keep it up.