This is hectic. You've got a terrific ear for melody and all the skill it takes to spin that into an audio file! 4.5 instead of 5 because it's too short! moremoremoremoremore xD
Reviews for "Sequence WIP"
Lockyn responds:
Thanks so much :') I will be sure to finish this one up first, seems to be my most popular at the moment xD Cheers!!!
This sounds great. It'd be awesome to hear a full track. Only reason for the 4.5, otherwise I really like this. The highs could possibly be a TINY bit punchier on the chords that start at 0:14 to match the brighter sounds of the leads in the sections before and after, but that's the tiniest little thing I'd change personally.
Otherwise, I love your layering and the way you clearly understand how to piece together some solid and punchy sounding synths. I somehow came across this while looking for stuff relating to Geometry Dash, go figure.
*EDIT* Oh right, I searched Theta and saw a level by a guy named Theta which is what I go by for music, and I have an album called Sequence, so I started tripping out wondering what this was. Come to find a really dope tune, so that's cool! Sequence was the name of my first ambient album way back in 2006 lol I have only like 2 songs from it on here.
Maybe could use a bit more body.
Otherwise awesome, I can't wait to hear this be a full track-
Lockyn responds:
thanks! will finish this as fast as possible. cheers!
If you wont make it longer in next 48h ill gonne 0-bomb your ass to the other side of Milky Way.
Kapish? Now GO.
Suprising and incredibly rich piece of music. I mean, theres just soo many details all over the place.
My advice, in order to extend the song and make it better: make each "stages" last longer.
The main problem around here is - that you are not letting the listener to "taste" your song. Everything changes too fast and before they even really chewed the bits - the song is already over.
Extend each and every stage. Make them last longer. This way you'll hit two birds with one rock:
1. Extending duration of the song
2. Letting people proparly "taste" every part of the song.
Otherwise its like jizzing into your pants before you could actualy put out your junk.
It just happends to fast and ends prematurly. Leaving you with wet pants and feeling of stolen satisfaction.
Oh and do something creative with the ending.
Slowly dying out in volume and amount of samples is an easy and old solution - i know.
But i also dare to claim that you can do better then that.
Kudos!
Lockyn responds:
First of all, thank you very much for the detailed review, appreciate it!
I'll try my best but I don't work too well with time constraints xD looks like you'll have to get your zero-bombing finger ready T__T
I agree with the extension suggestion and detail stretching. This track has a lot more work to go for it. And agreed with the premature thing LOL.
I have something very different in mind with the ending. Not what you're going to expect, I think! ;)
Again, thanks! cheers buddy ^__^
This is one of the 3/4 WIPs that you could recognize the full from WIP... Kind of.
Well the rework paid off, right?
Lockyn responds:
Hopefully the rework paid off, I certainly think so!