Needs work but good idea
There were a lot of spelling and grammar errors but overall a good flash
Reviews for "re: zelda the dark knight"
link5019 responds:
thanks. hey can you help as a voice actors
not too bad
two tips
1 you should work on your grammar
2 get a different background.... black is pretty boring
link5019 responds:
what kind of back round and i am english and i ha to salvage and fix what i could for 2 hours. by the can be a voice actor if so look at my news.
Not Bad, in fact, i like it!
Gotta Improve it, but i think you just started in this thing, so you're doing pretty good! keep it up!
link5019 responds:
kinda new but it was heavly weighed with tweens except for the battle.
pretty good
like other said there is room for improvement. but you got a nice story there. I liked the fact that you used pictures from the actual game as well. keep going!
Room for improvement
I can see what it is that you're trying to accomplish, but I feel that you should put more work into the story. There are several mistakes regarding grammar and word usage, making the introduction difficult to read and understand.
The animations are good, but they are very small, making it harder to see and enjoy the action sequences.
link5019 responds:
i know. i salvaged what i could. but i have a problem in making the series because i need voice actors. if you could look at my news and respond if you want to help.
oh and don't worry the actual series will be anime with a bigger screen. right now i need to put the finishing touchs on the characters and get voice actors