LOVED IT
I loved it even without the lack of bg's it was good
you should storyboard beforehand perhaps
really good style!
maybe some sound fx
and definately more character detail some angles were lacking
keep it up !!
Reviews for "Jet Vs Keisha"
TaraGraphika responds:
I did do a storyboard...I'll do a better one and Backgrounds for my third Flash. Yes, SFX are going to be in my third Flash. I'll get the Character detail as clear as possible next time. Thanks!=)
Ok animation
This is a really good animation for your second flash, it was not that good tho, try to have something a little more simple at first then slowly improve your art as your animation skills get better.
Ok, plot
Bad animation(second attempt tho)
over all i say you got the talent and Enthusiasm to go far in the animation world
Looking pretty good so far. I'm sure your style is only going to get better.
Potential
I can see that you have some talent at drawing, and it looks like you know how to do FBF. That's a plus for a 2nd flash. I still feel the need to give you a legit and honest review, though.
I know people have already suggested this, but backgrounds are important. Even if you don't feel like drawing out different angles of the room or area that the characters are in, you still should have something in the background so it's not always completely blank.
The music doesn't really fit, in my opinion, especially since it's the only sounds in the video. Speaking of which, there weren't any sound effects, which seem like they would be important for these kinds of flash videos where two guys are fighting. It just feels too empty and dull without them.
Also, one minor thing, but there was that one little part where the girl realized the soda can wasn't in her hand, and there was text that pointed out that her hand was empty. Try to avoid pointing story elements like that out to the viewers. Instead, try to make it clear to the audience that someone snatched the soda out of her hands. Get what I'm saying?
Well, complaints aside, this video does show that you have a lot of potential. Just keep animating and improving; you'll surely get better.
TaraGraphika responds:
I really, really will add a Background for my third Flash. =)
Yeah, I was in a hurry to get a suitable music. Since I start off the Animation first. So I kinda lay back things...
I get what you mean by not showing story elements. I'll try to avoid tht too~~
Thanks~~=)
not very good
i know this was ur second animation but i still have to say i was quickly uninterested by this. Bad Animation, good luck next time