Enjoyable but some flaws
Kinda didn't make sense until the end which made the cartoon enjoyable. I agree with WhiteGagsta69 on this but don't get me wrong, make the plot better
-D.G.R.
Reviews for "Watch the Birdie"
it was...ok
i would've liked it much more if you had either
a)kept the same animation style throughout the whole thing
or
b)put more time and effort into the dream sequence
nice bird
not bad. i feel that i got the general idea of the story, but it would seem as if the elements of the man's dream were placed because they were cool, first, and only loosely worked together to describe the old man's situation, which i think should have been the priority.
knit-picking: the pigeon that looks up at the beginning of the animation appears to be at a very strange angle. i don't know if this was desired?
Choppy, blurry, photoshop?
The ending made it somewhat worth watching, but other then that it just seemed all slopped together.