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Reviews for "Orange Adventure Xmas"
Hulalaoo responds:
Cough* *Cough ? you have a dick in your mouth ?
Good, but could've been better.
The animation was fluid, however it just seemed to lack proper pacing in a lot of moments and I started to grow tired of it as it neared the end, but the ending made me smile :D.
Some suggestions I'd have are creating more "tense" looking scenes that aren't as slow moving (I noticed some of the slashes seemed to be more like ballerina spins). It just seemed too slow to actually be dangerous.
I realize this was meant to be kind of a "silent" movie that focused more on the music, but I feel in this particular case it would've been better to have sound effects to go along with the music, it just seemed to detract from the experience rather than add to it.
It was still a solid flash submission and I gave it a 4/5 and 7/10. Just some suggestions to make it better =D.
Hulalaoo responds:
thanks man !
Kickass
It was alot better then I thought it would be.I loved the bid,but found the end with Santa appearing and all to save the knight to be a bit random.
Other then that,it's a fantastic video as I mentioned before,keep up the great work! ^_^
Awesome...
execpt for the ending. It sorta messed the whole thing up.
that was pretty good not what i expected but still pretty good. 0.o