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Reviews for "MarLo"

...what?

Not really funny, just sick humor associated with video games...and it was MUCH too short. I'm not saying it's bad, it's just that there's way too many video game parodies out there, and, quite frankly, it's clogging up Newgrounds.

xDlol

JAJAJAJAJA THEME HALO IS FUNNY!

Lacks a lot

Storyline: Mario is about to finish the level and is sniped by Master Chief who then takes the flag and somehow it magically ends back up on the stick and he somewhat humps Mario.

Audio: Kind of meh since I couldn't hear the songs too well but heard the sound effects just fine.

Animation: Sprites, I know you're attempting these only until you get good with flash but it doesn't happen magically, instead of just using pre-done sprites try to create some of your own sprites instead. A UPS Mario and Orange Master Chief could have proved to be amusing and the dimensions for width were a little messed up as well.

Overall: I really don't see why these types of flashes are popular, yes I see a lot that were worked on greatly but this didn't seem to make the cut too awful great, it was far too short. Also the sprites were kind of dull, as in THESE are the kind of sprites I see all the time.

Hopefully you can improve in the future, so-so animation here.

SCTE3

yoshiblue1733 responds:

SCTE3

Thanks for the submission, I have benefited from this review. This was a first submission for myself and I completely agree with you, it is surprising to see many fans of this type of work.

Cheers!

lawl

Nice idea. The concept was quite brilliant, yet simple. The only problem I have with it is that the background didn't cover the whole screen, you could still see the white on the sides. Overall, nice parody and worth the 30 seconds it took to watch it.

yoshiblue1733 responds:

Yeah unfortunately the largest width allowed on Newgrounds is 932. I would have put it larger if possible.

Thanks for the response!

100% Full of win

I was not expecting that at ALL!! Just when you think you've seen every kind of flag pole parody, someone one ups it. Good vid, look forward to other submissions from you in the future.