nice try
the bicycle part at the end made me laugh a little but its a lazy flash 1/5 3/10
-Fletch-
Reviews for "Car Man"
for a start
its OK.i would obviously try to improve the animation and some of your jokes i found amusing however i found that what really saved it for you was the SMB3 joke.
So yeah if your planning on making more i would also recommend you might make your own characters instead of using cut outs from dragon ball Z and pokemon
and also the character in the cars personality seemed all over the place.He tries to miss the woman then doesn't care?
nakile responds:
Thanks! He was suppose to be hitting her on purpose. Thats what I get for using the wrong sound effects and reusing facial expressions!
Really?
I'm not even sure what to say. Your animation is subpar (and not in an ironic or funny way), your humor lacks any real wit at all and comes off as largely childish and stupid.
Don't come back until you've stopped putting stick figures and Dragonball Z shit in your animation.
Very Newgrounds ish
Let us make the checklist of a sterotypical flash
Random DBZ Character- check
Get a pokemon reference in there- check
Use mario sound and joke- check
All in all it was fairly good animation and sound just so over done.
2 of 5
5 of 10
Random
Pretty good for someone just getting started.
It really was a bit too random for my taste, but I guess there was a plot.
The difference between your own work and the other images you used was a bit extreme. Try making some more detailed images of your own for next time.
nakile responds:
Thanks! I would have used all original content if I had the time. This was two week class project leaving me with about 12 hours total to go from nothing to a finished product ready to go, so I truly didn't have enough time to make everything from scratch.
Next time I won't be under a deadline so I'll be able to do a lot more.