really cool!
i like the funny sex jokes but you should put more feeling to your voice when you talk , its like acting , and the sound effects , you should try to put it on a low sound like if it would be real, but i really like it!
Reviews for "Roomies! Episode One!"
Jochio responds:
i cant argue with a good Review!
the voice acting on my behalf werent that good indeed.
But Windtunnelarchives was great! il inprove it for Episode 2 :)
thanks for the usefull tips! il work on it!
Hehes :D
Here's another thing that will make you smile today . :]
Good job . Waiting for the second :D
well there was too many pauses for text
and the toaster had some terrible voice acting, and the lip syncing wasn't very good, i liked the length but you need a better microphone.
and the characters need name introductions, oh and one more thing that you can easily revise would be that when they had first heard the toaster talk, and they're hiding behind the couch, and the redhead "jake" says "i think it did . . . but just to be sure" the transition between well drawn jake, and typical horribly drawn jake, wasn't seemless, it needed work, the way i would have done it would be he says "i think it did" then you do a shot from just behind the toaster, and you see the couch, and his head pokes up all scared. that woulda been nice, oh and also when they're behind the couch, and jake is done talking, the blue haired guy goes to say something to the toaster, and he is all of a sudden on the other side of jake, when originally he was on the viewer's side of jake.
loved the effort tho, aaaan i'm looking forward to the rest of the series!
Jochio responds:
i apreciate your review! and also the things you pointed out!
a few of your points however, were mainly because i rushed that part of the movie :P
I already got the message about the part where they switch sides behind the couch though :P
it was a mistake i made, and i didnt have the time to change that, and i pretty much found it amusing.
Episode Two will be greater than this though, and there acualy is some sort of introduction,
but il make Episodes describing them as a person :P
lol
hehe that was defidentally marth and roy :D
That´s ME!
Omg. My voice sounds awful in this clip
Anyway, the timing of the animation and the voices are a little off in the end. and I don´t has a fringe. I love the rest :)