SSSUMMARRY
quite good i think. the colored one is much better, if your going to make a series, make it your own i say, being close to a mastermind type movie as it is, you wouldn't wanna go all out Copycat with the red. the humour was very english like (i can see thats what you were kinda aiming for). the voice acting was good, microphone sounded 90% ,it could have been slightly clearer but 90% is still good. I noticed though at some points an American accent slipping through when you were doing the English characters.. Not a great deal just every now and then you could hear the american deep 'R' emphasis in the speech, probably wont notice it allot if your from the US. the animation quality was alright, as i said, looks better in colour,the mouth movement was okay and was consistent with the on-off period of talking and not talking. everything was nice to look at. i was worried for a bit at the start after the running race when credits came up, i thought it was all over..lol. but yeah i think your movie all up was nice.
if you wanna make a series of this then go for it, pm me when you get more episodes up.