its ok
not bad for first time juts try harder
Reviews for "Firestorm(short)"
Strangly I liked it.
At first I thought this was just going to be some boring stick animation. But the guns were nicly detailed so it satisfied the gun fetish. If you were planing on making it longer but if it was longer I think the animation would need a little more movment.
friedp00 responds:
oh. im srry to disapoint u
( i scroo at spelling)
i did not really make the guns, the were from a templatez
Good drawings
It was less then good. You basically drew stickmen and put really nicely drawn guns into their hands. The rest is just guys punching and shooting and their is barely any animation at all.
I give this zero because the guns could have easily been taken from somewhere else and the animation is barely moving stick figures. Try harder next time.
friedp00 responds:
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thats my style.
im not that good at animating yet, so i use others guns and basically its a collage of a whole bunch of firing tests
Oh nuts.
Good for your first flash, however when it ends the music doesn't.
When you press play again the music starts up again and loops over the first.
friedp00 responds:
yeah. i dun know how to put that script in.
i c a good series
yeah after i checked wmp if it was playin n it wusnt it eant that u gotta fix the bug that lets lastresort keep goin after movie. thats only bug keep up the gud werk
friedp00 responds:
thnx. u are the only 10, haha. im working on my animation.