Work
this as the name implies has Potential. work on it, add some color, and some more functionality to it.
Reviews for "Potential - Episode 01"
TheYnnub responds:
Thanks, and I'll try and get the next one in color.
it is neither a flash game nor movie
therefore it doesn't really have much of a place here. good idea. but maybe on a different site.
TheYnnub responds:
Not even 1 for the "good idea"?
Aww. =)
Not bad.
Needs work Ynnub. I enjoy the story and the witty humour, all well and good. But as you said, the filesize really dumbs down the quality of the picture and can make reading a pain as well as the characters detail.
Some BG Music or voice acting would fit this well and I'd recommend giving it a shot. I'd also enjoy some character background on that last page, just so we know who's who.
Keep trying, you'll get it right.
TheYnnub responds:
I agree. I'm considering doing more of a "motion comic" style for the next one. ;)
Just because something has potential...
doesn't make it great. Why not submit these drawings in the art portal if you cant make a flash? There it could reach its potential better
TheYnnub responds:
It just seemed impractical to upload 39 seperate page images and link them to one another when they can all be viewed in one convinient place.
Though I do agree, it's not neccesarily a "game", but I uploaded it in the Flash/Interactive category, and I suppose it's slightly interactive.