It's OK for what it is.
But,
-Too short.
-His hand went WAY to far.
-The stretched glasses and gun are very noticeable.
-Some frames seemed to jump.
-Half of the wall is black (Unless it was intended)
-The madness day bar seems unnecessary (Since its been long gone)
Everything else was okay.
Take more time on your flashes, you might be surprised with what you could make.