This looks like it could be a level from a stylishly simplistic video game. Like someone else said, the only problem I can think of is some of the perspective is a little off, but otherwise, I love it.
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BoRKman responds:
Would be nice to see a game that look like this.
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BoRKman responds:
Dun wur3h. cRe4tuuRe w1l 4pear s00n.
Ultra simplistic but sooo much atmosphere! Reminds me of an old 2D scroller game called Fear or something like that. However, this looks like a modern equivalent with some nice puzzle solving baked in. WE can sense that the tower in the background is our destination, still there is some ominous with the foreground and it is clear that there is a puzzle here we need to solve. Very nice depth, yet keeping some tension! Even the crane, which is probably stationary, makes me believe that it will start to move at any moment and hurt us. Really cool. I've ranked this 4.5 because there are some perspecitve challenges. E.g. the handrail is smaller on the upper platform than the lower. The tension in the ropes defy gravity a little since the arch is strange but otherwise a really nice moody image :)
BoRKman responds:
Thanks for the reply! I can agree with the ropes (Its supposed to be wires but) are a bit strange and handrail is smaller and so. But hey. We all begin with something. All we can do is improve and practice.