not bad
The aim was (judging by you'r comments) to creat a fast paced random flash, not bad. the speed was quick but the sense of urgancy wasn't it was over before you could build a sense of speed. The randomocity was mediocre, i've been random for over six years now but lack the ability to put it to paper like yourself. if instead of the guy shotting him with an arrow, he see's the vampire, the scene cuts back to vampire where he is standing with a bow and arrow ready behind the vampires head. It has to make less sence to apply randomness. let every though run wild.