Pretty good
Nice film wise. The music went with the theme and the words were ominous which is what I think you were going for. However, yeah there wasn't a lot animating to it, but if you have only been doing flash for a week thats pretty good. Plus, I would like to see this turned into a series. Just, for a commercial/prologue it was pretty good. However, seeing more of a sotryline would be good for the first episode.
keep at it
some of your animations came off a bit choppy, and some of the sprites didn't really fit the background. Some of your sprites didn't work too well with the background (ie the first scene, the main character looked like he was walking on the background rather than the floor). The music was fitting for the mood that you were setting. It'll be interesting to see how you drive the story with the introduction of some well known villians. Keep working at it, tweek as needed, and don't give up on it. ^_^
Thank you ^^
Really Good
From only using flash for a week at least, it is really good. Not sure what the story is all about but everything else is great.
Thank you :) i'm glad you enjoyed it ^^ and you'll look forward to the continuation where the story will be explained slightly with the first episode!