Good try
Nice effort. Some weaknesses would be that some of the movement is too slow. For instance, the guy taking five minutes to cross from one end of the bar to another. The narration and dialogue are somewhat stilted at points:
"such evil...creatures!"
"I can only think of one thing to myself"
Fair choice of music, and the general color scheme works well too, though the actual sound effects are not up to the standard of the music.
C'mon, bro. "The message is very thought provoking and smart"? The message is yours, isn't it? Way to toot your own horn.