Critique
Well, like many other people say on here, it sucks it blows blah blah blah. yea its not Egoraptor nor is it Oney level of art, but we do have to take in consideration that this person is actually trying. people who rate here usually dont know how frustrating it is to make an animation using flash, many just judge on the quality of tha graphics and how smooth the animation was. In my opinion yes it wasn't very good, animation-wise, but no one started a pro, bocadamondo needs to work on his english, and he should look around for animation techniques, learn some tips and im sure he will do just great later on.
note that im not putting stars on here because this is his early work, he is still developing his skill