Reviews for I.S.-The Beginning [Pt1]

[NitrogenousBeing]

Simple and I like it! Keep up the good work!

I think you did a great job with the camera to make the flash energetic and simple. The animation was pretty good not the best ever but good enough that I could get into the story. The flash left me wanting to see pt2 and the timing of events seemed just right.I also think the music you ended with was a very good choice. I watched this on low volume so I the volume change at the end did not bother me at all rather seemed just right. However, I would suggest balancing out the sound and comparing it to other newgrounds flashes to make sure the sound level is perfect.

[musclegeek]

k here goes:

The art was shabby and the animation was choppy. The audio was also sub par, because i had to turn my speakers all the way up to hear the voices. practice your drawing, and next time make the voices louder, and spend more time smoothing out the animation.

secondly: do your research. The guy could have easily gotten off without so much as a slap on the wrist because the officer who arrested him didnt even REMOTELY read him his rights.

[Locustpt]

Nice one

God damnit i just hacked a bank
Wish i saw this earlyer xD

Cool flash, voice volume was a litle down beside that 10/10

[GammaBeta]

naaaaaaa

not that good. storyline could be better

HelloLilly responds:

So what do you think that should be improved in the storyline?

(Please PM HelloLilly and MFRS if you read this)

[GraciousUndead]

Not bad

Only a few things should be changed, the script is riddled with really bad transitions, for instance I doubt you can learn how to hack a bank off of wikipedia, tone down the really abrupt music its annoying having to quickly turn down my speakers so the neighbors dont complain.

oh and by the way, stfu jackc45v2. I believe that unless you have weighed in on reviews and gained some leeway you cant rate on comments. or atleast have submitted some flash.