Needs clean ups.
The story is okay.
But you need to pan and zoom whats happening.
And try 30fps.
And NEVER,EVER FRAME BY FRAME ANIMATE these kinda movie.
The Play button needs a larger hit area to easily click it.
Export it as 100% JPEG quality for the best quality.
And yes, make everything smooth and it should be better than ever.
ok thanks for the advice :)
Meh
This animation is well enough constructed, but it fails to really excel at anything. It doesn't play up its resemblance to other stick fighting animations out there and make you laugh at the action. It also doesn't use the environment to full effect; sure, it plays with the calculator numbers and page lines, but that's it. The sound effects are also minimalistic at best and certainly don't help the experience much. I appreciate that you're literally shooting numbers around, but to no great effect.
In short, a well enough constructed animation that just needs a better concept and more polish. Keep making flash, as I'd love to see what you can come up with.
thank you
WTF
I seriously have no idea what just happened there. What is the point of this vid? Is it like calculator vs. pencil or something?
@Enhance: It's not really the grammar so much as the punctuations that he needs to work on.
yes the grammar was bad but i fixed it
Great concept
I like this kind of thing. It wasn't very good like it was now, but I'm sure some nice things could come out of this.
Great idea! All big flashes have to start somewhere!
I'm no expert but I'd say bigger font, a soundtrack and smoother animation :-)
thanks for the advice
It's decent
I like the originality.
But it was somewhat dull, needs a soundtrack or at least some type of audio, and you should improve the ending.
Also, your grammar in the ending area is horrendous. Please fix it.
thanks for pointing the grammar out it is now fixed