I am Torn
I don't know if the graphics would have interfered with the sound quality, but blowing sprites up to here they are that pixelated was a bad idea. I also have an issue with the huge size of your background, it takes up most of my screen and i have to disable my navigation bar to see the whole game/movie. Maybe if you made the whole thing a little smaller scale, or worked with some vector graphics for the sprites. I understand you can upscale them with out pixelating them like that. I don't know if my opinion is helpful, but I do like your idea, I just can't stand the presentation. Wavechan made a tutorial on line art and some mentions of vector graphics that I think you might help you with the sprites
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