Pretty but flawed.
It looks fine; amateur graphic novel, fine. But it's not written that well and the presentation of the text doesn't help. Also, the damn "police" badge cursor covers the text when you're trying to click on it. Fatal flaw: since the same mechanism (left click) is used to advance the text (which is essential; no way I'm going to wait for it to "type" in -- that's suitable for captions at best) is also used to make choices, and since they're made in the same text area, I clicked right through the first choice without meaning to. And since there's no way back...
Two suggestions: 1) just put all of the text into a block and let the user scroll through it. DON'T use single-character "typing" to display the text. 2) Put the "choice" decisions somewhere else -- maybe at the TOP of the page.
I'm going to give this a low score. It doesn't mean the same thing as when I give real crap a bad score; in this case it means "doesn't live up to its potential".