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~ Animation ~
Very smooth animation all around. I can't find any complaints about anything that you did. Keep up the good work here. Do you think you would be interested in lip syncing in the future?
~ Graphics ~
Usage of sprites obviously so I can't complain about what they looked like too much. I do think that the screen could have been a bit bigger though. On top of that the subtitle bar just a tad bit smaller and the face of who was talking next to the subtitles to be a little bit more linear with the subtitle bar.
Other than that graphics were perfectly fine.
~ Story/Content ~
Just as the others I haven't watched the ones before and if I had time then I would. I really do want to, but I simply don't have the time and really only have the time to watch what's requested in the Review Request Club.
You set up a very interesting story though and if you would like to get me even more interested in it you could request the prequels to this in the club and I'll watch them sometime.
About perfect here as well.
~ Audio ~
I almost felt like taking a lot more away off the score, but I decided against it. This is really the only place that you lost points in the submission. The voice acting itself is great. I don't think you should change that at all.
The quality though sounded like you were 10 feet away from the mic. Too be enjoyable your going to have to find someway to improve that even if it means getting a new mic all together.
~ Overall/Summary ~
I personally think you could make the size of the screen bigger, subtract the size of the subtitles a bit, and really think about getting yourself a quality mic to make this submission better.
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