This is a decent start.
this is a pretty good beginning piece. For sketchy looks, the animation was decently smooth. You chose a pretty good song to go with this too. get a nice art style to go with your animation, and you may have a future in this. good luck!
Not bad for a first
hey dude. i did like that the animation didnt totally suck for an early movie. The little machine gun stick dude was pretty intense. But next time maybe take a little more time on animation and if your doing a war themed flick, maybe some war themed music. Not that your pick was bad. I suggest something like BYOB by System of a Down, something heavily war related. but overall not bad. 3and6
promising future (hopefully)
Well picked soundtrack.
Animation was slightly reppetitive, but good nontheless.
I'd like to see what your work would be like with the additon of colour.