Good+weird. but the feel was a little lacking
Animation: 10/10 the animation was smooth. nuff said.
Artwork: 10/10 The artwork was great i liked that the cartoon feel with the weird added in was able to tell me a story in a feeling. I didn't really like the backgrounds "look" just on that it felt like it be missing 1 or 2 things or that it just felt out of place. i know you wanted the out of place feeling with the weird background and stuff though lol. it just felt "missing"
Music: 5/10 Personally? I hated the music. it was cheesy and the beatbox left a lot to be desired. using computer drums would of had a better effect to what you were trying to do then the beatbox. It just wasn't weird in a good way. It was just out of place. It would do better in a comedic animation perhaps.
Story: 10/10 a lot of it remains unclear to me but i love the general concept of it. It was weird. But in a good artistic way. The way he seemed to fit his feet a few times until he started to become old and unhappy and boring. Then the girl came into his life all happy and crazy and he becomes the young crazy boy he once was. They seem to complete the puzzle floor. they then free themselves from the puzzle floor and run off together.
I didn't get the total message but hell it was awesome.
Overall It had about the right pace it wasn't to short or to long.
As far as getting the feel of the animation through backgrounds and music.
It felt lacking. The rest told it pretty well. But the music just seemed humorous and lame in parts where the animation was more serious and mysterious. The music didn't fit it.
Anyways that's just my opinion.
Great job dude!
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