I like this.
I like this alot, I wish there was sound though. You did a really nice job. some parts i dont quite understand whats going on or why. but i look forward to the next one. maybe that would clear things up.
I give you a ten. Now make another!!!! =]
Thank you! I definitely plan on making an Episode two.. and making it better than this. I also hope to have a better computer by then.. (one with the necessary software to play audio) so I can add sounds. Thanks for watching though, and thanks for the score.
uhm
why no sound
The computer I use for flash is pretty messed up and old and it is lacking some software to play audio. I really wanted to add sound. I may sometime in the future.
awesome animation
the animation of this video is very good in my view, one of the best stickman flashes i have seen!! if this video had some music and sound effects then it would be really really good. none the less very impressive :)
Meh
Its pretty good. Oh and, people, read the 'Authors Comments'. HIS SPEAKERS ARE BROKEN.
Almost there.
I don't know if it's just me, but I'm not getting any sound whatsoever. And it's a darn shame, because with a bit of sound this could be even better. Naturally, I suppose, but still.
I like your art style-- a new take on the stick figure approach. The animation could be a little smoother, and maybe take out all of the unnecessary movement. Like when he's rolling on the rooftops. Come on, that's just a huge corn fest.
Maybe for the plot, you could have made it clearer as to just what's going on? From what I can tell, some guy was injected with some presumably experimental drug and now has super strength, and feels like he needs to go on a rooftop-rolling rampage five years later, killing people in a large building. No, it doesn't seem very entertaining.
The backgrounds are maybe a little oversimplified, even given the rather simple art style you have. Everything but the background seems to blend in, but those rectangle shapes with windows just turn me off. I can understand your color scheme, that's not what I'm referring to- maybe look a little in to that.
Regardless, hopefully the next entry in to this series will work on some of the flaws. <3
Thank you for the constructive criticism. I will definitely try to work on these things if I make a sequal.