Reviews for Gene 47 Episode 2

[Kweaks]

Pretty Nice.

I was just looking around, getting some blams and saves in and so I came around to this, which actually kept me watching throughout the whole episode. The storyline and narrative drew me in, it was entertaining without being too showy.

I can tell you put a good deal of effort into this, seems like you pulled off mouse drawing really well; it's a pain in the ass to do.

One thing I noticed is that you tried painstakingly to do the perspective manually, which looked decent but also there were parts where it could have been better. If you want to make your scenes really shine, you should check this out:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /98074
It really takes the guesswork out of perspective drawing and makes the field of depth a lot more realistic. Something I thought you'd appreciate.

Anyway, I really liked the voice-over, that was one of the aspects that kept me watching the most. The storyline was good too, but I wonder, where are you taking the next episode?

Can't wait to see your work on number 3.

The-Void-Gate responds:

Thank you so much for the comment and watching And thank you for that link Its really going to help :)

[yuusuke1]

good job

i like the sinister side of this movie and yet i find that it would most likely be true. all i can say is that you did a great job and i can't wait for the next installment in the serries

The-Void-Gate responds:

Thank you for watching and the comment :)

[Natter91]

Good try

Needs some work. The animation looked pretty good, actually, but there was a background hum in your voice recording and some background noises should have been muted slightly so they don't drown out your voice.

And, biggest thing. Please, please, fix the grammar and spelling mistakes. THe biggest mistake. The sign on the Olympus Corporation's building looked nice and big and fancy... and it said Olypis. Horribly wrong. There were numerous errors in other places, which really detracted from the feel of the movie.

[MorshuTheShopKeep]

Nice

Great story and good character animation, although the backgrounds need a little work. Other than that I thoroughly enjoyed this flash, good job.

[bookmight]

I like it

Pretty durned good, during the intro monologue I kinda zoned out, I wasn't sure what was happening and I the rain scene and the tone of voice just made me stop paying attention because I thought it was going to be some EMO flash. But then the hospital part comes out of nowhere and the flash became awesome, so great job.