keep it up
youre' on to something here, just try to put a background picture into it and clean it up a bit and you have yourself a good flash. Nice music choice too.
Reviews for "Rejected Flashes"
IKanzAnimate responds:
Thanks for the tips, and as for the music, i didnt have a song to fit ALL of them, so i resorted to a simple song :D
Neat
I like the stream of consciousness feel to it. Might be interesting tying the four separate pieces together with one plot.
IKanzAnimate responds:
Thanks
Okay but more
Needs more stuff. The stuff you had was okay but it needs more to qualify as a real flash movie.
IKanzAnimate responds:
Going to work on a much longer flash, adding backrounds, sounds, and make it really nice. these were just to test out flash and a tablet
You have plot...
but it isnt good. I thought the begining was funny and got me excited for a funny flash, but just disappointed me. One star for music and one for the begining. But either make a plot or something that goes along with the songs. I realize that you are only testing something, but i still would enjoy a little effort.