pretty good
really funny
Reviews for "Rorschach's End"
LOLERIFIC!!
VERY GREAT SIR! You get a standing novation! *standing novation*
Galneda responds:
*bows* Thanks very much!
rule 65
no exceptions
Galneda responds:
He is not "an hero" and it's completely irrelevant to the flash anyway.
DOOO ITT!!!!
i thought he was going to spontaniously combust XD great twist
Galneda responds:
WHAT-A-TWIST!
THAT WAS THE MOST EPIC FILM OF THE YEAR!!!!
I wonder if Rorschach's fart made a gas pattern resembling that of his signature. Or suggesting it was a wet one, I wonder if it left his signature mark. Hmmmmmm. On that note, I also wonder if his undergarments are made of the same material as his mask. Mornings would be quite awkward, wouldn't you say?
Additionally, if Dr. Manhattan were to break wind, wouldn't that annihilate everything downwind in a nuclear Armageddon of flatulence? That is precisely why you don't see superbeings lighting their farts. It's deadly.
Ahhhhh! Right! The actual review! I found it to quite hilarious! The fact you could make a fart joke work so well is.... well... Pwnsome. The plot twist was like a ninja in the shadow of night came into my house and ambushed me with a ninja attack of blow-you-out-of-your-mind-awesomeness . I did not see nor anticipate the plot ninja's attack. It was just that good. Sorry about the length of the review. You can hate me for it. It's cool. I know I do.
Galneda responds:
Nah, never hate yourself for writing short-novels of reviews...I do it all the time!
Just make sure you're staying on subject on the reviews...lol.
Basically what I got out of this three paragraph review was "I did a good job in making the fart joke come out of nowhere, as it was so unexpected, it was incredibly funny to you." So thanks!