Not as good as the others.
It was too short, not as random, and not as funny. The music was good though.
Reviews for "Pencilmation #8"
that was boring
te ones you made before were better
Meh. "Pencil"mation.
I dont like how the pencil did barely anything in this one, it was more about the animation and not enough about the pencil interacting with the characters and scene.
Pencilmation's kinda losing its novelty...
When you first started pencilmations, indeed, I had seen many times before the idea of things being drawn in during the animation, changing the story. But, it was okay that you still did it; it still felt at least a little original.
But now, I'm really wishing that you would move on to a more complex type of animation. The black and white stick figure drawing is getting kinda repetitive, and I'd like to see you grow as an artist, rather than be stuck in this gag forever.
Even the original humor, most of which stemmed from the acts of a pencil drawing things to dramatically alter a situation, has become kind of weak. As an example, nothing is drawn after the characters are made (which doesn't really count, that's more of an entrance) except for the glass dome.
However, if you still find it neccesary to keep making Pencilmations for a long time, I suggest you increase the overall pace, especially with the humor, and definitely EXPERIMENT with other things: Dialogue, multiple pencils, colors... Anything to seperate them from your previous works.
no hand
the hand is extremely distracting and changes the feel of how the older pencilmations were.