Better than the last
The voice work didn't sound as forced, but there definitely wasn't as free flowing as it could have been. Boomer, being the lovable bad ass, probably shouldn't have gone into a philosopher's train of thought in the beginning. If you really needed that, you should have given it to the 'soldier' (not important enough to be named, I suppose) because it probably would have been better. The ending was pretty stereotypical for the genre, and the classes of monsters you put at the end, you may have wanted them to fight instead of the 3 kinds they fought throughout your series (it would have made for better fight sequences). All in all, you're an above average animator, although if you put alot more dynamics in your characters and voice work (instead of stick figures and Star Wars style crap voice-work), you would definitely be not only getting 10 stars from more serious reviewers, but you may go on to make money at it