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Ur art wasn't very great but it would really have mattered if the story made sense.
just because you get it doens't me everybody else is going to under stand it. make an intro or something.
Reviews for "ponyo"
absolutely hilarious
I was going to say that I chuckled here and there, but that wouldn't be the best description for a 10/10 review, which this flash so rightfully deserves.
Why would you do that.
You need better everything if you are going to make a fanflash of a Miyazaki film. Which you obviously weren't trying to do. Why even make it if you hated the movie which was great. You sir, need to improve yourself.
Lacks script
And i don't mean "Action Script". At the begining of this movie, it seems is going to be a story, but it in the is just a bunch of random unconnected sutiations. And since the randomness is not funny, the final result is something wich is not coherent, nor it is funny.
You should work on your scripts a little more, don't worry about the art, if its funny/intresting enough, it won't be very important.
Best regards.
Well...
This flash needs quite a lot of work. The graphics weren't noteworthy, the sound effects were lackluster, and I didn't really see a point storywise, unless it was intended to be a random collection of weirdness. Uhh, two for effort I guess, but ultimately not worth watching.