You've thrown together a great intro on this song, and I quite enjoyed the more upbeat drop on this song. I just wish there was some more progression going on in the song during 1:26-1:55. I actually think you should add more to the song, and make it a bit longer, maybe add a more dramatic ending to match your building intro? :)
I like what you've done so far with this song though, and can't wait to hear the final version.
-DGurt