"Good start but needs improvement"
You have a good concept, but I believe you should have spent a little more time fine tuning it. Walking around just dodging fire gets boring fast. Good idea with the weapons but with alittle more animation they could be kickass. The melee weapon was a disappointment. I dont see why it is in here. You should at least award the player for taking the risk to get close to enemies. Plus I believe you should work alittle more on the story line and grammar. Instead of "big and powerful" you should kick it up a notch and expand on it. Just dont get to lengthy.