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thats so true
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thats so true
Needs improvement
YES YES, i see you point, you want to give the viewer the feeling that his life is slow... But this makes it so slow that I start to realize that I have more interesting things to do that see how this ends... If you want to show drudgery in a characters life, don't copy it exactly for the viewer. by the way, I saw how it ended, but the moral/pun or anything you were aiming for wasn't really strong...
On a positive note, I liked your backgrounds! And I'd like to give you some points for trying to experiment with stretchy timing!
GOD! WHY?!?
this could have been 1000x better. i have to give u a 0/5. i would have given a 4/5.but that... "music" ws enough to stick a chair leg through my cscreen... but i have self controll. seriously, change tha music and re-post it. i did lol at tha porn tho