hmmmm nice
good little tune mate, really liked it when everthing kicked in, but it's on the sparse side with the keys, a bit of bass n sum ambience would really help to fill it up.
the distorted guitar effects are gud, but they seem synthesised, if you need help getting a proper sound i cud help you, as i play guitar. the second guitar part is far too loud, just take a bit off and it ill b fine.
i do like the drum arrangemnt, with the toms and that. tho one of hats doesnt fitthemix right.
overall a really nice tune, it has a lot of potential but needs a bit of a push to give it that wow factor, which it isnt far off.
keep it up
n give me a review.