An awesome idea for a flash.
This is one of the best Clock Day storylines I've heard. I really enjoyed the part when Stamper passed the note to Tom telling him what day it is. The animation was spectacular, the way you drew Tom was great. I got a laugh out when Strawberry Clock called Tom his slave, I've been waiting several Clock Days for that truth to finally be revealed. Great job with this, I really enjoyed it.
The only problem I had was that the ending seemed lazily done, it was unfitting to the rest of the flash. I would have just ended it with Tom locking the door and Strawberry Clock having one line, but the Orange Clock and shooting part seemed unnecessary. Anyway, that was the only problem I saw, this was almost a perfect flash in my book, I was thoroughly entertained from beginning to end. Keep up the great work!