it was.. a good effort
9/10 for the amount of effort. cause u must of worked on this a lonng time.
but i hated the voice acting. the only good one was the sprite fairy thingy. everyone else seemed like thye just read the line from the script, rather than.. voice a character doing the line. sprite lady did a REALLY good job though.
and it seemed like half the characters sounded like, depressed or something.. like they were talking quietly so they wouldnt wake their parents while they were recording. like, i cant say this without me coming across as an asshole but im going to say it anyway.. all the characters sound like nerds and there are definite characters here but its just written, not shown with their voices. maybe im just really picky with voice acting cause i enjoy creating characters myself so much and i make sure they have good voices.. i dont know, but either way, im sure some people agree with me the voice acting could use some work.
plus i jsut realized, its cause they are sprites that im not liking the voice acting, the voice acting's not BAD but with this kind of flash u have to make the voice actors bring out the characters with ONLY their voice, and the well written script.
also, there were lots of typos.
so, in the future flashes, make the audio shine and be funny and not be cheesy and do all these things WITHOUT the animation. cause once u do that, and add animation, it will shine greatly.
i hope u take all this criticism constructively, and hope you dont think im an asshole cause i just say these things to try to help