An improvement
You really have an ability to create atmosphere. Besides being on the edge of my seat because of the creepy stuff, I was pulled in by the interesting character logs. Character logs have been done before, but you still made yours unique enough that I wasn't bothered by it. The game was a little on the easy side, and I still don't enjoy the fetch quest since it can be difficult to see at times, but overall, it was an enjoyable game. I look forward to your next installments.