hilarious
great! parodying communism was never so awesome, good script and anim.
Reviews for "TBA- Time Trial #2"
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~ Animation ~
There was a lot of good animation throughout the entire thing. Some parts had a lot of detail in the animation while some places didn't such as what I consider the second part of the flash where the man was walking back and forth. (before the woman blows her brains out) I thought that there could have been more detailed animation going on here such as him blinking, etc.. It basically looked like a stagnant picture bopping up and down and being tweened across a background, which it probably was.
~ Graphics ~
The same thing goes here as I said with the last one. Some things were drawn out very well and were very detailed. At times things weren't drawn the best such as the man walking back and forth again.
At other times it kind of seemed like some things were drawn bad on purpose. Such as when babies were being thrown into the fire. Some of the background and body parts were done rather well as the babies and the man weren't done very well at all giving me the impression that he was done bad on purpose to give some sort of humor. I guess that's ok, but I guess I much rather see the good animation throughout the whole thing.
~ Story/Content ~
The video and the pictures in the submission were the only downfall I guess. I was hoping to see stuff that you made yourself. I guess that's implied whenever you open any flash submission on newgrounds that you expect to see someone's personal work and not something that they just put over onto their movie.
Other than that there were some funny parts. The woman shooting herself, the baby fire, etc.. Other parts were trying to be funny, but really weren't that funny in itself.
~ Audio ~
My favorite part of the flash probably had to be the audio. All of the audio was very clear and the music that you used was very fitting for the submission.
The voices towards the end over the loud speaker were a bit hard to understand at first so I had to turn the volume up. When I did turn the volume up you switched to the scene where it was inside and you could hear him a bit louder and clearer so the change in volume was a tad bit too much in that situation.
~ Overall ~
Not really something that I would recommend for someone to watch and wasn't really something that I would watch again or that I thought was funny, but for the most part animation was good and the audio was done well.
The loading screen and the credits were done nicely as well.
~ Review Request Club ~
A pretty good effort
Wow, you certainly showed those pesky North Koreans who is the boss around here, didn't you :P
It's not a bad piece, complete with some pretty cutting edge jokes about the North Koreans although with the state of affairs with world politics at the moment and any arms proliferation, perhaps the next one can be focussed on Mahmoud Ahmadinejad and the Iranians, with their great ideas about Nuclear power, as opposed to Solar power, since they obviously don't get enough sun in that part of the world.
Well drawn pieces of animation, though the person that drew the Hitler invading Russia piece did get the swastika the wrong colour - it should have been Black. Yes, I'm sure that Hitler would have been a Rammstein fan as well, had he lived long enough to see them :P
I'm not sure I got some of the more obscure Russian references - who was the guy farting into the mic for Stalin? The only person I could think of that looked like him was Lenin, who would fit the bill, having been bitter political rivals before Lenin's death. If so, a great reference.
Not bad with the drawing styles, but some of them could lean away from the more obvious tracings, which would certainly help to keep a good handle on the final presentation.
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