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~ Animation/Graphics ~
Very simple animations all around and mediocre artwork. The art could have been worked on a bit and the introduction to more complex animations could have added some nice features to this flash.
~ Story/Content ~
I think this could have been better if it was longer of course, but I think the way of approaching this to be longer would be to have a slower build up to the climax. (pun intended)
Something like flashbacks of the two characters together and happy times, etc... Then you could go to show Mario with her.
~ Audio ~
The song wasn't bad and went decent with the submission. Nothing really much to talk about there.
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