Everything that needs to be said
has already been said many times. So I'll just kind of sum it up... try to keep the song in one general mood. The beginnign was dity, the melody was happy. Didn't really fit in my opinion. It was good, but didn't fit.
The little wind like sound you had at the beignning kind of like, was offtune a bit. Maybe if you make the same tune as the bassline? Maybe that'll sound better.
Overall, pretty good work, but I dislike the FL sounds.
-zenon-
I can see, lol. I'm gonna have to look for a cheap synth maker or something, that's the only thing holding me back obviously. Thanks for the review!
-SuperDrummer146
Melody To My Ears... I Must wisp off to the Casino
Lol its a really great song. Im not all smart in FL or with techno for that matter. But I really liked this song. In particular the beat. Had a very nice dancing beat. :-D Also thank you for you review.
Thanks man! Yeah, if you though this was good, you're gonna totally flip in joy when you see my next song, it'll really get into you. I love this next song very much, but it gets annoying after having to listen to it to pick out the details, but in the end, it's worth it to make Newgrounders happy!
-And you're welcome for the review!
-SuperDrummer146
Damn, too much FL.
I don't mean that FL is a crappy music maker, but all you used was FL presets. I'm sick of those smaples, I've heard them too much... other than that, the son is alright. I'll strart ripping it to shreds and commenting on it now :)
The beginning was a little cliche, with the very basic drums. When it broke in, it was nothing like I was expecting. With the slight semitone changes you made in the bassline in the beginning, I was expecting something really dirty. All I got was this happy thing? :(
Now that I read your comments, you say this is happy hardcore? Naw man, this is just like very europhoric trance... if you want this to be like happy hardcore, make the tempo around 150 +, then make sure the entire song has a happy feel, no dark, no real dramatic break downs, just plain happy. And fast. I won't judge from what you said, though :)
As for drums, I'd like to hear a solid 4 quarter note kick drum, with open hi hats on the offbeat, and a big solid clap, you know? So it has more sustenance.
The song is good, but it has much more potential than this. Grab some samples, make the sound your own! Not FLs sound, make it yours.
Good work, I see good things for you in the future :)
Oh, and thanks for the review you dropped me on my song 'veangence'! I really appreciated it :)
Well, okay, I won't call it happy hardcore then, I'll call it my style, lol.
-As for samples/presets, I still have yet to actually get the full version of FL Studios, so I'll get a load of drum samples later. Presets, well, I've been experimenting with that as well, and the next song I release with show you what I can do with just a demo, you'll see.
-Nah, I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just saying I'm pretty sure I'll surprise you with this next song I submit sometime soon, this week, or next, whichever, lol.
-I'll work on my sounds then, that's all that's holding me back, but I've got a couple of tricks up my sleeve with the presets, so i'll see if I could eventually get Rapture, or something I could make my own synths with. That would be nice.
-Thanks!
-SuperDrummer146
LOL
LOL I reveiwed the wrong song ignore the other view on ur classical piece
Yea this song needs some major work.
Your arp bass thing is way generic and..
The lead you got is chessy which I guess is what you were going for but itz also generic.
Also the songs kinda lacks a good build up the one you have lacks anything that really sets it apart other than that little note that rose and fell.
The Drums were far too buried and didn't really add anything to the song. They need improvement
With all those tweaks it might seem like It wasn't a good song but in reality it was above average.
5/5
Yeah, I saw, lol. Wish I could truely laugh, but I'm in a drowzy state because I took the wrong medicene. Of a little bit, I was wishing I wasn't alive, but now I have a good review. Thanks for cheering me up!
-SuperDrummer146
=^..^= hehe
Well it does sound like a casino hehe. What I have to critique on is the need for a more origional synth. I don't know what program your running but since you mentioned FL before I will just say that your using that. Put some effects on your synths and try for a more intracate beat. Id like to hear a harder kick in this song. Other than that you get a 10 for originality cause of the melodie you came up with. It goes from light to dark which is pretty fun. I did that with my piece "While you are awake and asleep". Enjoyed it and keep working harder on your own style. Ill expect even better next time! hehe.
~Red 7
Thanks for the review! I'll bug you about a rating later, lol.
-SuperDrummer146