Reviews for I'm a PC: 14 YO Edition

[Ingtieno]

Well...

You say in the author comments that there is a lot of crap that passes portal and hates that everyone is blaming your stuff, but if this video passes, you will be a hypocrite.

The animation is a fest of lame tweenings, lame worst-than-MSpaint drawings, lame jokes, pitch annoying voice and obliviously trying too much to be funny (what kills the humor).

There is not much of what I can suggest to improve ther than practicing more and completelly redoing this animation, from scratch (if you are so inclined to save this). Also, try frame by frame, please.

coolcanadiandude responds:

Someone is selling a fucking Warcraft account!! You blam this but not tht shit ur a fuckig hipocrit!!

[Jips]

No stars

practise hard dude.

[Sh0ckFyre]

What the hell?!

This is just full of hypocrisy. You say "crap" gets through the portal, yet this just got passed. It's animated, at best, the voice acting can be replicated by choking a giraffe, and it wasn't funny. Apply yourself next time you post something TWICE.

coolcanadiandude responds:

Wow fucking spam is what I'm talking about!! Look in ur stupid awesome collection WTF is mga 2.5?! Huh that is spam in ur stupid collection!!

[GodsBigMike]

um...

Sadly, I've seen crappier animations than this, but that doesn't mean that this is good stuff.

[Cha0tic221]

All the 0's reviews are right.

There was nothing good about this in any way.

Im not gonna flame you for doing what you've done, I'm actually gonna go over things. OMG

K, graphics, poorly done. Try smoothing out the animation instead of just going from one frame to another and back again. Do frames in between the smooth the movements into it.

Sound, the music was louder than your voice, or whoevers it was, idk. Could not understand what you said other than wowzers...

Its not that you don't know how to draw, its that you don't do enough drawing. Put more gradual movement into the animation. Even just raising an arm should take at least 5 frames or else it looks choppy and poorly done.

If you beleive that you worked hard on this, then good job, you probably made yourself better. Just keep trying and work on the things i mentioned.