Dude, this was just hilarious. Deliciously silly.
The dialogue had a very natural flow to it, and the premise is just... so off-the-wall (or... IN-the-wall; nya HA. Nya HAHAHA.) that I can't help but love it. I also really liked how you managed to pull off distinct voices for each of the characters without resorting to silly voices or overly cliched foreign accents. Not many people can do that; so kudos to you, good sir!
And best of the luck in the competition!