Very Good
STYLE
I haven't seen this kind of things at Newgrounds for a while. I think it's great using flash animation to show your feelings to the rest of the people.
ANIMATION
The animation was very good for being your first. Of course it could be improved, but with time, I'm sure you'll do better.
BYE-BYE!
Well I hope to see more of your works, since you have an unique style. Good Luck
Thanks for the encouragement! I'm glad you like my style.
I'll be sure to do more, especially since I have some ideas for a comedy :D
As I can see, this is your only SFW thing you have here, I liked it, the animation is pretty simple but very good, and the message has been sent, your art has became so much better, keep up the good work!
nice
next time don`t put it on a loop and try not to have the music cut out at times. but other then that it will be good once you get some actual movment in there
The music sounds fine on my end. Could it be a problem on your end? The sound files are mp3s... and I'm not sure how well previous versions of flash player support them, or it could be your speakers or something :/
Thanks for the positive review though! I'm sure my next stuff will have some decent motion in there :P
Nice
I really think the animation could be more better than this, but I loved the idea and the message. Also, I think that the music is not the best.
Sorry you didn't like the music as much as I did, but I'm sure it was still at least okay. I'll work on my animation techniques and come back with more ;)
Hahahah I loved that
NATURE GOT OWNED just like real life! work on having less swuiggly animamtion, try using he line tool
Hehe, yeah. Thanks for the tip, I'll have to experiment more with that tool. I guess it could really accentuate the difference between the nature scene and the industrial scene to have hard-lines in the industrial. If I ever do something similar to this, I'll have to do that.