Eh...
I suppose for a first attempt at an animation this isn't that bad. But you could definitely improve it. Like the guy below me said if the framerate was higher this would look alot better. You could also spend some more time on the animations, make them look nicer and more fluid. I think that this could have been alot better if more effort and time was put into it, but not bad for a first try
hmmm
You could make this a lot smoother by making the frame rate higher! If that was done, it would be smooth, and look much better.
Not a bad movie...
But you need some work on it though. A suggestion for you: add sounds to each action the guy makes, charging the attacks, hitting the wall, etc. Also, when you make your next one, try to make movement a little more fluid. Everything was a little choppy. But in all actuality, not a bad first attempt! ^__^
Thanks! And I'll spend much more time on the quality next time.
nice
For a first, it's very good work.
Sorry, not good enough
Flash is made with FLASH, not pivot, ms paint, or windows movie maker.
It is poorly animated, has no storyline, has horrible graphics, and is overall horrible.
If you actually want your flash to pass, there are 2 things you can do-
1. Actually buy flash like the rest of us on newgrounds
2. Get AMAZING at pivot, elite at DarkDemon.org, get your animation flashed, and submit it professionally to newgrounds.
I am sorry, but you must become better. 0/5 and no stars.
Definitely--- If I'll ever have the urge to make another flash, I'll make it much more professionally. This was just my first attempt at creating something myself (and not just standing in the sidelines). To be honest, I've seen flash much worse than this on newgrounds, but thanks for the advice.