Good Choice in Music, Interesting Style
I thought it was a good film, with a interesting style. I also applaud your choice in music, especially the desert scene with The Doors song. I would like to add that it would help to have smoother transitions in the scenes in terms of the plot. Elaboration would be greatly helpful as far as how the scenes are tied together. You should also credit the audio when ever possible(just for future reference). Keep up the good work.