Captivating
The story and characters are very interesting, im excited to seem more.
Reviews for "Edwin Ep01"
Good
I thought it was pretty good and you should continue it. I wanna know if Edwin dies or not.
Kieran-s responds:
Yeah, Ep02 is very close to release.
My only gripe was...
... That Edwin's vooice actor sounded like he was recording in a dungeon.
Kieran-s responds:
Maybe he was, why? Do you have a problem with dungeons?
...but
Nice design concept, I like the color and texture choices. The story actually seems to be going somewhere (too many animations don't). The voice work is too monotone for my tastes, but perhaps you're working towards something stylistically. Good concept work... but...
Your lines have square caps, and would benefit from better use of different thicknesses. There seem to be some line errors too. Example: Edwin's nose. It looks like an extra line is sticking out the end. Add to that a square cap, and it is distracting and looks awful. This sticks out as a problem just about on just about any object that is supposed to look organic, ie hair, face, clothes.
Kieran-s responds:
Yeah, I used a type of line cap the makes the lines pointy insteadt of blunt, but it keeps glitching. But oh well, its only a nose.
Grar!
Amazing, superb, it was better than cats. I'm going to watch it again and again.
Kieran-s responds:
BETTER THAN CATS?!?! ARGHEGAHCB*#%$^!#